Weather with you ll Creative Writing Matrix

For English, we had to choose one of the tasks from the Creative Writing Matrix. The task that I've chosen is "Weather with you". I have to write a descriptive paragraph or a poem about a character. The weather shows how the character is feeling.

The weather is like you
You are happy like a glowing medallion scorching through the sky
You are sad like a raindrop pouring from dark clouds
You are angry like a bolt of lightning tore in the night sky
Your emotion matches with the weather
Wherever you go, you will bring it with you
You will never know when it's going to change or when you have to control it

What am I learning?
I am learning how to write a descriptive paragraph about emotions.
How does this show my learning?
By completing my task
What am I wondering?
If I could make it rhyme when I do it next time